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Yes, cars can be spooky. At least mine was, parked in our garage one strange October night. This time of year, it’s easy to picture witches and goblins flying by the window or tapping you on the shoulder, but being unnerved by your automobile?

That night my youngest son Paul left to get something from the garage. He came back with a funny look on his face.

“Your car sounds odd,” he said. Not knowing what that meant, I had to investigate. Sure enough, my car was making a strange noise…like someone breathing.

It sounded like the car had just run a big race and was finally getting its breath back, with slow, human-like pants.

We stood there, confused. It didn’t help that this night was typical late October—windy, dark, and easily spooky. Only Paul and I were home. My husband Randy was away on business.

Paul and I walked around the car, looking for clues, but nothing seemed amiss. Had the radio been left on? Was a tire leaking? Nada. We listened to the hood and that’s when we realized the “breathing” was coming from below the car.

Paul and I stopped, catching each other’s eye, both thinking the same thing. Was someone hiding beneath? An escaped convict or serial killer on some murderous rampage? Was he lying under my car for a quick break? Was it a wounded animal, a large, scary mountain lion or wolverine? The garage door had been left open. Anyone or anything could’ve wandered in.

We got on either side and tentatively bent down. My heart sped up, ready for someone or something to pull me under, something desperate and savage and terrifying.

But there was nothing.

Still, the strange “breathing” continued.

“Weird,” said Paul. Yes, it was weird.

We came back into the house, but later, couldn’t help ourselves. We returned to the garage. Sure enough, the car was still doing that slow, strange panting. Again, we looked everywhere and found nothing.

The next day I came out and the sound was gone. We never heard it again and still have no idea what it was.

If someone or something was there in the garage that night, they hid themselves well and left. But we never found anything, so it was probably nothing, all in our imaginations. Or was it? We’ll never know.

Whatever the case, whenever these spooky October nights roll around, I think of that night, a night Paul and I never fully understood and never will—the night of the haunted car.

 

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Comments(22)

  1. Good story … and the picture of that Dodge is pretty spooky too!

      • Laurie Stone

      • 3 years ago

      Thanks, Tom!

    • Lea Sylvestro

    • 3 years ago

    Whoa Laurie! So wonderfully weird!! So Stephen King and Christine! And you told it so well. Great build up and so well written as always. I was delighted NOT to have an explanation at the end….a wandering raccoon or something. Hmmm….I SO love October and Halloween! Thank you for this great tale! XO

      • Laurie Stone

      • 3 years ago

      Lea, Still have no idea what — if anything — it was.

  2. Ohmyword! What a deliciously scary story! I had visions of ‘Christine’ for a few minutes!

      • Laurie Stone

      • 3 years ago

      Diane, I thought the same! But it went away and never came back.

  3. Maybe your car was Christine! Did you ever find out what it was? Did it ever happen again?

      • Laurie Stone

      • 3 years ago

      Lauren, I’ll have to see that movie, never did. Nope, it never happened again and never knew what it was. So strange.

  4. That’s so weird. Cars do strange things sometimes. Makes me remember the series My Mother the Car. When it starts talking to you, then you should really be scared.

      • Laurie Stone

      • 3 years ago

      Rebecca, Laughing. Yes, when it starts talking, something’s definitely wrong. I remember that show, My Mother the Car!

  5. I just had a thought…On the ranch, the cats used to climb up under the hood and sleep on the engine where it was warm. We lost more than a couple of cats that way. Had you recently driven your car? This mystery is intriguing me!

      • Laurie Stone

      • 3 years ago

      Diane, Never thought of that. Under the hood was the only place we didn’t look, although I can’t imagine how something could get under there. Still, you never know…

  6. Whooohooohooohaaa! That was spoooooky! Did you pop the hood? I don’t think I would have had the nerve.

      • Laurie Stone

      • 3 years ago

      Adela, Under the hood was the only place we didn’t look! Now that I think about it, maybe we should have.

  7. yes,,,a cat in the engine!

      • Laurie Stone

      • 6 months ago

      Ha ha! Maybe…

  8. I was waiting for the cat to jump out and claw you or Paul!

      • Laurie Stone

      • 6 months ago

      Pennie, Strangely, no cat. Just… nothing.

  9. I’m glad you found nothing. To have a person hiding in your would have been terrifying.

      • Laurie Stone

      • 6 months ago

      Rita, That’s for sure!

  10. Definitely scary. Glad I haven’t come across that…yet!

      • Laurie Stone

      • 6 months ago

      Jennifer, Have never heard the sound since! That’s the strange part.

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